Thursday, November 7, 2013

Week 11- My Narnia

When I walked into my closet to i was throwing piles of clothes outside in my room when suddenly BAM! A doorknob was right firetruckin there! I opened it to reveal a ladder that was made of pure gold. I climbed the ladder and found a world that was made of gold. So shiny and beautiful I had never seen anything like it. In this world there was golden people that worshiped me for not being gold. There was an evil with named Ms. Hudson who was made completely of platinum. They sent me to fight her where I totally annihilated her in a battle. I then woke up from my dream and went to my closet where I found no door knob.

5 comments:

  1. A evil "with"? Oh, so you haven't learned to proofread yet....

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  2. A evil "with"? Oh, so you haven't learned to proofread yet....

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  3. Haterrrrr^^^ "right firetruckin there" lol(:

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  4. WOW Trey I'd change your grade if I was Hudson after that comparison. Miranda watch your language!

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  5. A gold ladder would be AWESOME.

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